The first burst of light

Photography \ Nature | 12/25/07 @499 | XeriuX | critiques (12) | views (313)

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The first burst of light, a picture i made on the first day of christmas in the morning

you can see Delft below the sun (The Netherlands)

just a digital camera, nothing special. Check the full version though

If you have any critics/comments, tell me so i can improve ^^

have a nice christmas!

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moserArtist

12/25/07 @544

The landline/city is to small in proportion to the sky imo.

The "sun burst" could be more off center.
At the center of the sun I notice a yellow:ich tone. Is that maybe from using "burn" tool in post editing?

XeriuX

12/25/07 @567

no burn tool used, very little post editing work done

thanks for the critics

Daykan

12/25/07 @930

Beautiful sky! Agree with Master Patrick!

Madanapale

12/25/07 @939

A slight lower exposure may render better details on the higlights and some work on the middle tones can help
Carlos

purplerose

12/26/07 @235

Pretty nice.

RvascoF

12/26/07 @652

I really like this centerd compo because it gives the burst sence and the small land line fits well...!!!

thomasM

12/27/07 @105

nice work
i like how small the skyline is in contrast to the sky and how much is going on in the sky while the city seems so "dead"
just maybe some more contrast in colors

XeriuX

12/27/07 @481

thanks for all the comments

flyhart

12/27/07 @579

Great shot. A little bit more work in PS. try to push the colours, with Hue/saturation mode!
Keep it up!

Vasco

12/27/07 @705

Nice work but I have to agree with some of the comments above, like Carlos and Patrick.

Maidith

01/01/08 @529

Oh wow... the mood and colors are awesome.

blackshad

01/02/08 @660

strong mood ... nice capture
i agree with moserartist about the rest

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